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Amegaki Junior Member

Joined: 28 Apr 2009 Posts: 142
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Posted: Tue Apr 28, 2009 8:46 pm Post subject: Amegaki Gouken |
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Name: Amegaki Gouken
Age: 17
Gender: Male
Height: 5'11"
Weight: 136 Lbs.
Soul Class: Quincy
Occupation: Student
Appearance:
Amegaki Gouken usually has on a Polo shirt, with black pants. He has square glasses and his black hair usually covers up the edges of them. His skin is a warm soft white color and his eyes are completely black. He is not very muscular, but he isn't weak either. He is lean. His hair usually stops in the middle of his neck, to avoid swaying when running or moving quickly. His hands are an average size for a boy. He has a braclet on his wrist that drops down with a cross on it.
Eyes: Black
Hair: Black
Skin Color: White
Body: Lean
Mask Design: N/a
Personality:
Logical
Gouken always thinks of what the best course of action is before actually doing the action. This can be an ally, or sometimes, an enemy. He usually finds his answer out through speculation of the area and the person deeply.
Good Conscious
If Gouken ever makes a bad idea, he usually cannot live it down inside. He hates making mistakes and if he hurts someones feelings, he cannot get on with his life without apologizing correctly. He usually has urges to do the right thing when the time arises and usually does.
Inner World: Gouken's inner world is a post nuclear blasted city, having darkness and radiation all about. This is mainly because of the fact that he hasn't truly discovered it or himself in the city. There is another him in the city, wearing exact opposite colors from him. The other Gouken attacks without warning, usually trying to kill him in an attempt to take his body. Gouken tries to refrain from going into the city, he feels that this is simply his mind playing tricks on him. Gouken is said to be the one who destroyed the city.
Stats:
- Spirit Energy: 64
- Strength: 5
- Endurance: 10
- Spirit Power: 17
- Spirit Pressure: 10
- Speed: 22
Skills:
- Unarmed: 0
- Melee Weapons: 0
- Ranged Weapons: 0
- Spirit Techniques: 0
- Movement Techniques: 0
Powers:
Name: Quincy Shot
Soul Class: Quincy
Skill Requirements: None
Other Requirements: A bow
Type: Energy
Description: A basic attack for all quincy, it shoots arrows made of spirit energy from their bows
Effects: +1xSpirit Power damage
Force: 1xSpirit Power
Cost: 0.1xSpirit Power
Feats:
Name: Particles Gather
Soul Class: Quincy
Skill Requirements: None
Other Requirements: None
Description: The quincy fight by gathering up spirit particles from their surroundings and using them for their attacks
Effects: Gives NxSpirit Pressure points of energy damage to amplify attacks in the following 3 posts. These points can be allocated freely. N equals 1 in the Real World, 3 in Soul Society and 4 in Hueco Mundo. Can't attack or use powers in the post you use this feat
Weapon: Name: Quincy Cross
Other Equipment:
None.
Background:
"Amegaki Gouken was just a normal guy until the age of 15. At that age, something strange happened. Something unexplainable, so I'll try my hardest. After some strange event happened in the Hueco Mundo, people around the world developed strange powers, Amegaki was blessed with the powers of a quincy, and others with even more unique things." The story teller continues talking about Amegaki and the kids listen intently. This was the story of Amegaki Gouken, the Protector. The old man continues, "He trained for some time on his own to perfect the unstable powers of a quincy and manages to hone his skills enough to take down small hollow with low reiatsu. He wondered how to perfect the powers and ended up asking another quincy about the powers. The quincy trained Amegaki until he was strong enough and the teacher died. It is unknown who that teacher was, because Amegaki never mentions him." The kids all 'ooh and aah' at the story being told. As the man starts to continue, the door opens, shining a little light in an Amegaki walks in saying, "What, you tellin' your little stories again?"
_________________ Ichigo Kurosaki

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Hideki Takahashi Trainee

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Posted: Tue Apr 28, 2009 9:39 pm Post subject: |
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| Quote: | | Quincy start off with 50 Spirit Energy, the "Quincy Shot" power and "Particles Gather" feat. |
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Amegaki Junior Member

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Posted: Tue Apr 28, 2009 9:41 pm Post subject: |
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Oh! Thanks, sorry. I'll edit this tomorrow though, I'm on PS3. I read through that, I guess I missed that, hmm... _________________ Ichigo Kurosaki
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Sench Lava is a dickhead

Joined: 22 Feb 2009 Posts: 243
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Posted: Tue Apr 28, 2009 9:58 pm Post subject: |
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1. Can't have a name matching a canon character's
2. Can't use a picture of a canon character
3. "Unknown" doesn't work for Inner World
4. You start with 50 Spirit Energy, as pointed out by Hideki
5. Since 50 is less than 100, you'd have all skills at 0
6. Remove Hirenkyaku from your powers
7. Seele Schneider requires moderator permission, and denied |
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Amegaki Junior Member

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Posted: Tue Apr 28, 2009 10:00 pm Post subject: |
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Yeah, sorry, I noticed the mistakes before you said them, I'll edit as soon as possible. _________________ Ichigo Kurosaki
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Amegaki Junior Member

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Posted: Wed Apr 29, 2009 4:08 pm Post subject: |
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Sorry for the DP, hows this? _________________ Ichigo Kurosaki
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Hideki Takahashi Trainee

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Posted: Wed Apr 29, 2009 4:23 pm Post subject: |
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It looks good to me but Sench might not like it and move it back but since it does look good now and i always wanted to do this xD
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