Doru Itazuki

Kushina · Trainee Joined: 28 Apr 2009 Posts: 143 Location: U.S.

Name:Doru Itazuki
Sealed Design:He is sealed into a small jar about a inch wide on both sides that looks about a inch thick both length and diameter. The jar is cold at all times.
Core Design:Turns into a mace that is about 2 feet long that the bounto wields. It is about a foot in width and has spikes a couple of inches long.
Released Description:Looks like a gray dragon that is about 40 feet tall. Has a very high density of skin around its tail and a lower density near its middle section although it is hard all around. Has spikes all across its body and it is approximately 1 foot long for each spike. The greatest diameter is 7 feet of thickness all around.
Stats:

Endurance:1/4 of users spirit energy
Strength:1/4 of users spirit energy
Speed:1/3 of users spirit energy

Damage Potential:1.2x strength
Personality:Is a mean creature that hates all living things that are not immortal. He likes to fight and train against others creatures. He also loves the taste of blood in his mouth when he is fighting somebody. He also loves ripping peoples throats out. He also likes constricting things.
Powers:

Name:Koori Boruto
Soul Class:Bounto
Skill Requirements:
- Unarmed:0
- Melee Weapons:0
- Ranged Weapons:0
- Spirit Techniques:4
- Movement Techniques:1
Other Requirements:None
Type:Energy
Description:Sends a bolt of ice at the enemy that freezes them into place for 1 post after you activate this power. This attack is unblockable. The turn after you use this, the enemy can block your attack but not dodge.
Effects:Freezes the enemy
Force:N/A
Cost:150 spirit energy

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Kushina · Trainee Joined: 28 Apr 2009 Posts: 143 Location: U.S.

k sench i fixed all of them i saw. I read a couple of websites=D and found i was totally of lol. I read the template over and i saw a couple of kinks that i smoothed out but i could have missed something.
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Yasuo · Posted: Sun May 10, 2009 6:31 am Post subject:

That second power is....0_o
And it doesn't have a name, 'release form' would be under the other requirements section.

Kushina · Trainee Joined: 28 Apr 2009 Posts: 143 Location: U.S.

ok I fixed the name and the requirements, saw a power like that online that a bounto on the show had so I made the cost higher and the requirements higher.
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Yasuo · Posted: Sun May 10, 2009 4:20 pm Post subject:

My problem with it is that it seems to be an 'insta-kill' attack when used against humans, I say against humans because what effect would it have against shinigami or hollows? None?
Also, is there any chance to dodge it? Is the ice instantly formed around the opponent or is it similar to the first power?

It has to be said that I only read the manga so my knowledge of bounto is pretty limited, although an attack which bypasses all defences passive or otherwise doesn't have much of a chance of being approved. It seems to me that regardless of whether your opponent has 300 or 300,000 spirit energy this attack will kill them straight away 0_o

Kushina · Trainee Joined: 28 Apr 2009 Posts: 143 Location: U.S.

ok, I updated it to be more clear and i'm in the middle of reading bleach, never watched it either so I don't really know that much either=D lol
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Yasuo · Posted: Fri May 15, 2009 6:44 pm Post subject:

The stats are confusing me, does it mean that the doll's endurance is 75% of the bount's spirit energy and spirit power added together or something..?
And I think you're better off just completely rethinking the second power, or at least tidying up the description for it because at the moment I can't understand it at all 0_0

Kushina · Trainee Joined: 28 Apr 2009 Posts: 143 Location: U.S.

yes, that is what it means and I cleaned it up again. *May be about 15 minutes till i can post again due to my having to watch my sister.
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Yasuo · Posted: Fri May 15, 2009 7:14 pm Post subject:

What do you mean by 'on the second try'?