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Yasuo Giant Pussy

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Posted: Fri May 15, 2009 10:00 pm Post subject: Scion |
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Description:
Scion are an ancient race of supremely gifted humans, they once served as the guardians and protectors for the human race, shielding them from the enemies they could not see or fight back against. Scion could easily be described as angels or demons as in their released stages they grow wings and some take on particularly demonic or angelic visages. It has become the sworn duty of Scions to fight and defeat hollows and other spirits which may wish to cause harm to humans, the fact that the Scion race is rather small has allowed them to escape detection from Soul Society which means that they have averted a situation similar to that of the quincys. However, over time the already slim number of Scion has slowly begun to dwindle with more and more either being killed or dying of old age, some Scion have even completely renounced their blood and turned their backs on their protective duties believing that defending the humans has nothing to do with them and that they should not have to put their lives on the line for people that they do not care for, any Scion who has decided to live his or her life in that way is seen as a cowardly outcast.
Scion are generally physically weak and lack the physical power of other soul classes, however they make up for this with their powerful energy based attacks which in raw power could very well be the most powerful energy based attacks there are, allowing a Scion control over even the elements. The release stages are what gives a Scion their true power giving them more power and enabling them access to more powerful attacks, these release stages can change the appearance of a Scion greatly, adding other limbs such as wings and tails or morphing their current limbs, though a transformation will never make the Scion look grotesque or unsightly. There is no specific way in which a Scion would act as their personalities tend to differentiate naturally, although most Scion are rather intelligent.
Rules:
- Scion start with 50 spirit energy
- Any stat above 10 will only count as 10 unless the Scion enters a release stage
- Scion cannot perform spiritual attacks unless they have entered a release stage
- The Scion release stages after stage 1 must be reposted for each individual Scion in the 'Post Feats' section, there can be any reasonable amount of release stages.
- The Scion must create their own powers (of which there can be any number) in the 'Post Powers' section
Battle Rules:
- Stamina: 7xEndurance
- Physical Damage: 0.1xStrength
- Energy Damage: 1xSpirit Power
- Energy Force: 1xSpirit Power
- Energy Defense: 2xSpirit Pressure
- Damage Reduction: 0.1xSpirit Pressure
Powers:
- Name: Energy Bolt
Soul Class: Scion
Skill Requirements: None
Other Requirements: Scion Form: Stage One
Type: Energy
Description: The most basic attack available to a Scion enabling them to fire a small but very fast bolt of spirit power at an opponent. The Scion can fire these bolts of energy at a rapid rate and can even add an elemental affinity to it.
Effects: 0.5xSprit Power
Force: 0.2xSpirit Power
Cost: 5
Feats:
- Name: Scion Form: Stage One
Soul Class: Scion
Skill Requirements: None
Other Requirements: 100 Spirit Energy
Description: The transformation that is necessary for a Scion to make full use of their abilities, in this form all stats will be counted as their true value. A Scion in this stage recieves the smallest of changes to their physical appearance with their eyes changing colour.
Effects: Allows the Scion to use powers, removes the 'counts as 10' limit
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Sench Lava is a dickhead

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Posted: Fri May 15, 2009 10:06 pm Post subject: |
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| Quote: | | can even add an elemental affinity to it. |
This isn't Naruto -_- Unless it was a soul class focused on elemental powers, it wouldn't work that way
Also, this looks horribly like a mix of Hogosha and my new bloodline on NRC -_- |
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Yasuo Giant Pussy

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Posted: Sat May 16, 2009 4:56 am Post subject: |
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It's a soul class focussed on 'magic' So I'm not going to disallow any member from having electric/fire etc. techniques.
| Quote: | Also, this looks horribly like a mix of Hogosha and my new bloodline on NRC -_-
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...What? |
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Sench Lava is a dickhead

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Posted: Sat May 16, 2009 10:46 am Post subject: |
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Every soul class is Bleach is focused on "magic". I don't see anything in its description or general abilities that suggests power over the elements, but I do see some thing that suggest powers different from that
And I said, this is a rip off of my custom soul class. The history is very damn close, the rules are the same, the general abilities have the same concept. Please enlighten me how this is original anymore |
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Yasuo Giant Pussy

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Posted: Sat May 16, 2009 2:07 pm Post subject: |
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This really has nothing to do with your soul class...I havn't even read it 0_o
However I did read the powers you posted and as far as I can tell, there's nothing in common, apart from the fact that they both have some form of release stage, and I'm pretty sure that doesn't make it a rip. |
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Sench Lava is a dickhead

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Posted: Sat May 16, 2009 5:13 pm Post subject: |
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Of course it isn't a rip. Because you surely didn't make rips of my customs ever before
Do you honestly think I'm buying that -_- |
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Yasuo Giant Pussy

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Posted: Sat May 16, 2009 5:24 pm Post subject: |
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| K, so I just read through the description for your Hogoshas...How the hell is it similar to mine in any way at all? Seriously now, what are you talking about? |
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Sench Lava is a dickhead

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Posted: Sat May 16, 2009 5:34 pm Post subject: |
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Let's see...
Description:
Ancient race - check
Supremely gifted - check
Historical protectors of mankind - check
Actually humans - check
What parts of the history aren't rips from my SC, is rips of Quincy, my new NRC clan and/or bullshit
General Abilities:
Focus on spirit power - check
Releasing "hidden power" by stages - check
Appearance alters with release stages - check
Full-custom abilities - check
That is not counting the several phrases you basically quoted from my topic
Additionally, regarding balance:
You say they are physically weak, but they're the same as every other soul class, except you gave them double the normal energy defense
Sneaking a couple of words about elemental control isn't a valid reason to have power over elements. Shinigami's zanpakuto can also have elemental themes and I won't stop people from having such, but no more than 1 element
| Yasuo wrote: | | K, so I just read through the description for your Hogoshas...How the hell is it similar to mine in any way at all? Seriously now, what are you talking about? |
That is about as convincing as the phrase "I have no idea what you're talking about", which people always use to (fail an) escape from some topic |
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Yasuo Giant Pussy

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Posted: Sat May 16, 2009 5:45 pm Post subject: |
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'Scuse me?
'Greatest people of the age' - No
Jesus - No
Died out - No
Historical protectors of mankind - No, they just helped out when they could, no one knows anything about them
Where in your description does it say Hogosha protected mankind anyway?
If the 'actually human' qualifies something as a rip then Hogosha is a rip of Quincy, who I might add are also protectors of humans, and oh yeah they were all killed aswell -_-
Appearance altering with release stages happens with arrancar, does that mean that Hogosha has also ripped them? No, of course not, so why does that mean Scion are a rip of Hogosha?
Oh my they're spirit power focussed, surely that means they're a rip!? No, but that would once again be another similarity to Quincy on your part...
I gave full custom abilities because I like diversity, guess what...Shikai and Bankai
I quoted nothing from your bloody topic because I hadn't even read it till about 10 minutes ago -_- |
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Sench Lava is a dickhead

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Posted: Sat May 16, 2009 6:00 pm Post subject: |
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1. So you didn't exactly quote them. That sure proves they're 100% different
2. There was one Jesus. If I saw you ripping that off, I'd just ban you from the site
3. Look at #1, and that's where you're full of crap too: you clearly state their low numbers kept decreasing, so there was no way any should have remained unless they found a miraculous salvation to aging
4. | Quote: | | they once served as the guardians and protectors for the human race, shielding them from the enemies they could not see or fight back against |
What part of this is not protectors?
5. Spiritual, cultural and national leaders qualifies as protectors of mankind. Of course, not that you'd know anything about that
6. Every soul class existing in Bleach are originally human souls, except Mod Souls that were modeled after ones. Furthermore, all except hollows look human. So it's all one large rip-off of everything else, which make your soul class a rip of a rip of a rip. Don't see how that helps your point
7. My soul class isn't a repeat of any existing one's powers. Yours is practically a copy of mine
7b. Given the general theme of their abilities is already a complete (and very poor) rip-off, their main focus being the same adds to its unacceptability
8. Shikai and Bankai are:
Released stages of a sword weapon
Always a weapon of one sort or another
Are two release stages with one basic theme
Have a couple of powers and Shikai ones are unavailable in Bankai, unless one of the Bankai powers is a powered-up version of a Shikai one
9. Stop lying
Well, whatever. Since you wouldn't admit ripping off, and instead argued with me in improper tone and with bullshit arguments (not that you could have a single decent one, seeing as how you were lying all along), here's the verdict:
In addition to rejecting this soul class, as I was going to unless you changed it entirely anyway, you are banned from making custom soul classes
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